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It's hard to believe
I'm here again,
after so many years.
I promised myself
I'd never return,
but it seems
we always do.
There are a few paved streets
where dirt roads once were
and the corner store
no longer stands.
Aside from that,
I'm shocked and amazed
by how little
things have changed.
The differences I see
are marked only by neglect.
Perhaps even God
has a sense
of disinterest.
The road I lived down
now has a name.
A lone mail box
stands out front.
Without four-wheel drive
you'll never get down it;
glad I came prepared.
I have to admit
I'm a bit reluctant,
but I've come too far
to turn back now.
I inch my way
through the mud
taking the high ground
where I can find it.
It's longer than I remembered;
thick piney woods line either side
until the road forks
at the end.
I veer to the left
and creep to a stop,
surveying the landscape
before me.
To my left
reminisce of my grandmother's garden
still stands,
a fence post here,
and a fence post there,
heavy with over growth.
Just to the north
her pet cemetery still exists.
The oak tree
I use to climb as a child
still towers above.
I look to its base
and find the word
'Mark'
still etched in.
I missed you, old friend.
I hope your rest
has been a peaceful one.
Beyond the cemetary,
my aunt's home is gone,
as is my Grandmother's
and my own.
In the mix of it all,
where my cousins and I played,
there is a sign;
the words read:
PROPERTY
OF MONTGOMERY COUNTY
LAW ENFORCEMENT.
I think to myself,
what have you people done?
My people,
what have you done?
I'm here again,
after so many years.
I promised myself
I'd never return,
but it seems
we always do.
There are a few paved streets
where dirt roads once were
and the corner store
no longer stands.
Aside from that,
I'm shocked and amazed
by how little
things have changed.
The differences I see
are marked only by neglect.
Perhaps even God
has a sense
of disinterest.
The road I lived down
now has a name.
A lone mail box
stands out front.
Without four-wheel drive
you'll never get down it;
glad I came prepared.
I have to admit
I'm a bit reluctant,
but I've come too far
to turn back now.
I inch my way
through the mud
taking the high ground
where I can find it.
It's longer than I remembered;
thick piney woods line either side
until the road forks
at the end.
I veer to the left
and creep to a stop,
surveying the landscape
before me.
To my left
reminisce of my grandmother's garden
still stands,
a fence post here,
and a fence post there,
heavy with over growth.
Just to the north
her pet cemetery still exists.
The oak tree
I use to climb as a child
still towers above.
I look to its base
and find the word
'Mark'
still etched in.
I missed you, old friend.
I hope your rest
has been a peaceful one.
Beyond the cemetary,
my aunt's home is gone,
as is my Grandmother's
and my own.
In the mix of it all,
where my cousins and I played,
there is a sign;
the words read:
PROPERTY
OF MONTGOMERY COUNTY
LAW ENFORCEMENT.
I think to myself,
what have you people done?
My people,
what have you done?
Update: First real crack at punctuation, plus a few minor changes in structure and spelling. Feel free to point out any errors you may find. Any other commits or suggestion are most welcome as well.
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This is cool, if extremely sad--both that you were able to go back, and that you were able to write about it. It is honourable memoir of a place that has meaning in the world, since it shaped your memories and your art.