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Where's My Diagnosis

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How many times
have I stepped to the edge
opting for that dreamer's
leap of faith?

As if my landing
would somehow cure my woes,
without leaving behind
the taste of gasoline.

Forever searching
like a fool in the dark
seeking a dream
I have not dreamt;

Searching for something
that may truly be nothing,
trying to fill spaces
between.

Lost without destination;
missing without pieces; I am
aimlessly discontent.

I wonder what you see
when you look to me
through open windows,
when all I see in the mirror
is a mess.

So where's my diagnosis?
Surely they've created a disorder for this,
something with a cure
to set this heart free.

That'll be forty-nine ninety-five, sir.
Here's your medication;
have yourself

a nice dream.
...
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TheMoorMaiden's avatar
I love the line: 'Lost without destination;/ missing without pieces', it really creates a feeling of helplessness. I also really like the way you've isolated the very last line from the rest of the piece. :D