literature

Far from Perfect

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I cannot stand hypocrisy,
though I know I'm guilty of it.
I care nothing for dishonesty,
but I've told a lie or two.

I do not condone betrayal,
yet I've set a few fires
along the way.

I would never blame another
if the blame was mine to take.

My intention was never to hurt you,
but it happened just the same.

I do not expect forgiveness,
I doubt I could give it
either way.

I would never claim perfection,
though I am a perfectionist.
It means I never finish anything,
because I'm never happy
with how it ends.

So I guess you could say
I'm far from perfect.
I would certainly agree.

At least I'm honest about it,
just as sure as the words you read.
Comments are welcome.
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xlntwtch's avatar
:+fav:-ed some time ago.
Came back for another look and see a typo: "..intension.." is spelled "..intention.." as you prob'ly know.
(Wow. A lot unintentionally is rhymed there. :hmm:)

The last two lines I'm a little more unsure of this time. What do you think?
Think they really need to be there? Too repetitious when you need to be (or not)? It's up to you, of course.
I still like this poem, by the way. lol